Recommendation 9

Pride Toronto make explicit that it is a not-for-profit organization accountable to its membership, owned by its communities and vested with representing the interests, diversity and diverse sexual and perspectives of the Pride communities.

Rewrite the last clause to show what you mean, please. I’m not going to guess.

Recommendation 3

This one shows just how little scrutiny the report actually received.

Pride Toronto should acknowledge wrong and apologize to the community for the pain it has caused.

I assume you meant acknowledge past wrongs.

(Xtra went right ahead and republished this error, incidentally.)